Wednesday, 27 April 2011

Evaluation Part One - Codes & Conventions

"In what ways does your media project use, develop or challenge the codes and conventions of real media products?"

When researching the genre for our media video, we found that the majority of real media products place a big emphasis on romance and intimate relationships. Straight away, we decided that we wanted to do something different so I think that by focussing our video on friendship, we challenged one of the main conventions of a pop music video. It was quite difficult to do so, as there's not a huge amount of difference between romantic relationships portrayed in music videos and friendships. Although we tried very hard to use settings and mis en scene to create a friendship storyline, it wasn't totally obvious in our final piece! For example, our media teacher's first opinion was that we had used a same sex relationship storyline. Although there was still the idea about a relationship in our work, it had in a way challenged a different convention in the way that we had used characters of the same sex. This is a very modern representation of relationships, and something that is seen in only a very small group of music videos. I think that our narrative scenes challenged the traditional conventions of a music video.

A lot of the shots and settings we decided to use were quite similar to ones already seen in real media products. There wasn't many other shots we thought of that haven't been used in other music videos that would be appropriate for our video, so we decided to use camera shots that we had seen in similar videos. For example, in Lily Allen's video for 'Smile', she is seen sat on a bed, and the shots move between close ups to mid shots, which keeps the audience interested. In her video, the way she is sat in her bedroom gives a sense of sadness and almost vulnerability and she looks quite bored, but we thought that the use of a bedroom setting would make our target audience seem relatable to who they are seeing in the video. We were quite selective about the settings we chose to use, as we all thought that mis en scene would play a really important part in trying to convey our storyline and would also signify to the audience about what age we are aiming our video at. For example, in the bedroom scenes, we dressed Emma in a dressing gown which had stars on it. The costume used in these scenes signifies youth which appeals to our target audience.

We decided to use a selection of different shots throughout each setting in our filming. For example, during the performance shots where Emma is on stage, we chose a close up to show expression and emotion of the words being sang. In Kelly Clarkson's videos for 'Since U Been Gone' and 'My Life Would Suck Without You', close ups are used when she is performing on stage which makes what she is singing look powerful and passionate. I also found that mid shots and full length shots are quite often used when there is a performance shot of somebody on stage. This allows the viewer to familiarise themselves with the setting and also creates a sense of excitement especially when fast paced panning shots are used.
Below is a slideshow of shots we used that are similar to real media texts.


When producing the items needed for our ancillary tasks, both me and Susan decided it'd be a good idea to keep the name of the artist and album the same as the original work. The album work we looked at mainly showed a fairly plain background, sometime with computer added images and usually with a close up of the artist's face. Katy Perry's album cover on the other hand has a very busy background, she is seen lying on a sun lounger with a sunny background and different accessories around her. A set would've been used to take this picture but this was too difficult for us to do so I decided to use a plain background. However, instead of using a close up like many other artists do, I challenged the conventions by using a mid shot that we took of Emma leaning on the stage with her arms. I cut this out so it looked like she was leaning on her name instead which gives off an impression that she is quite fun. Not only would this appeal to our target audience, it also goes well with the album title (One of the Boys) as she looks quite playful. A lot of album covers I looked at were quite general in the way that they didn't relate too much to any of the songs includes. CD singles on the other hand used images that were related to the song on the CD. As we took the pictures used for our ancillary task on the day that we filmed our performance scene, it meant that the outfit used on the CD cover is the same used in the video for Hot n Cold. This is the only similarity to the song, the colour scheme and the pattern used in the background doesn't relate to the song. In my ancillary task, I think I mainly used the same conventions as other CDs use, the only aspect I developed was the use of the picture which is similar to what is seen in the music video. My back cover was also quite similar to real albums, I used a picture of Emma on the right of the case and the list of songs next to her on the right. I also used a gradient to make the picture look quite hazy which is quite similar to Rihanna's 'Loud' album. Although they don't look the same at all, the conventions are quite similar.


The above pictures both show the artist positioned on one side of the case, with the song list next to them & a kind of hazy effect.

The font I used on my work is very similar to the font used on Katy Perry's album. I chose it because it's very fun and girly which would appeal to my audience. I decided against using the pink and blue colours that are used on Katy Perry's album however because against my plain background, they made my CD cover look like it was appealing to a much younger age group than I was aiming at. I still used feminine colours but darker shades to make the CD look more mature but still fun.

All the posters I looked at used the exact same background as the CD cover, just enlarged to A4 size. However, I decided to challenge this convention and create a new image for my poster. I used another of the photos taken from our photoshoot and kept to the same colour scheme to create consistency throughout the whole of my digipak. I used a font similar to the one used by Rolling Stone magazine which is very recognizable and relates well to music topics.

Saturday, 23 April 2011

Similarities To Other Videos

Before producing our video, both me and Susan looked at a range of pop music videos to figure out what codes and conventions were used so we knew what we should include in our video. In the slideshow below are some shots from our music video that are similar to scenes we have seen in real media texts.

Wednesday, 20 April 2011

Our Video



This shows our video that we've editted on iMovie. As it's currently the Easter holidays, we're unable to edit anything that people have suggested we change as we don't have access to the software we've been using!

UPDATE
Due to time restrictions, we have decided to keep our video as it is. Although there are some things we'd like to improve, we simply don't have the time to do so! All improvements are written about in my audience feedback and evaluation blog entries.

Monday, 18 April 2011

Video Feedback

On Wednesday, we all had to show our music video to the two media teachers and the rest of our class to get feedback on what we've done well and what we can improve. We generally got good feedback, even though we've still not finished the actual video yet! We have a good mix of narrative and performance shots, but we need to work on syncing every part of the video to the music. One of the teachers commented on our theme of our video and about the characters we used. We decided to focus the video on friendship issues rather than relationship issues which is quite often found in videos of similar genre, as seen in the screen shots below.

Rihanna








Pixie Lott



Katy Perry


However, she thought that our video showed a good example of traditional representation as you could interpret the video as being about a same sex relationship.


We were told that we had a really good balance of narrative and performance shots that complemented each other well. We also got good feedback on the narrative scenes as the story fitted really well to our target audience, and also flowed well. However, the lighting on the main performance scenes (where Emma is on stage) were criticised because of the quality of the shots. The lighting was very bright but the picture ended up being quite fuzzy and blurry. Filming in this setting was quite difficult as we were only able to see Emma clearly if the lighting was very bright, which resulted in the poor quality afterwards. Susan decided to upload our video onto YouTube and then onto Facebook, a social networking site that we both regularly use, to get feedback from a wide range of people both who we know and don't know. This picture is a screenshot of the post and the comments we recieved.



One person commented on the miming of the music, Emma didn't actually sing the song for all of our filming, sometimes she just mimed which could explain why it doesn't look as good as it could. This is definitely something that should be considered if we were to refilm some scenes.

Mr Rees, our media teacher, said that some of our shots were a bit still and said we should look at the Ken Burns tool on iMovie. This allowed us to select a certain area of a shot and zoom out in the direction we chose, which made it look like we had used more panning shots throughout filming.


Our Questionnaire

To get even more feedback on our video, we decided to create a questionnaire to give to other students between the ages of 16 and 19.

How would you rate our music video out of 10?
1 - 0
2 - 0
3 - 0
4 - 0
5 - 4
6 - 5
7 - 11
8 - 2
9 - 3
10 - 0

How would you rate the performance out of 10?
1 - 0
2 - 0
3 - 0
4 - 0
5 - 0
6 - 7
7 - 8
8 - 9
9 - 1
10 - 0

How would you rate the narrative out of 10?
1 - 0
2 - 0
3 - 0
4 - 0
5 - 3
6 - 9
7 - 12
8 - 1
9 - 0
10 - 0

Does the narrative create an easy to follow story?
Yes - 19
No - 5
Don't know - 1

Does our video look like a pop video?
Yes - 22
No - 3

Have we used a variety of different shot types?
Yes - 18
No - 7

The results show that all students rated our video with a score higher than 5, with the majority of people rating it as a 7. I think this shows that overall, our video is of good quality but still has room for improvements.
Our performance scenes rated higher on average than the narrative scenes, I think this is because we only had a very few scenes where only narrative was used, making it harder to distinguish between the two. Most people thought our storyline was easy to follow, which I agree with as we made it quite basic and light hearted. 22 out of 25 people thought our video looked like a pop video which is very good as that's what we had intended it to look like! The main things I think we could improve on would be using more shot types and making our narrative scenes more interesting.